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Wed Oct 16, 2024 8:32 pm by CaptainL
Hey there! Just got my first profile approved, and I'm ready to get started at AFW. Hit me up on Discord or DMs if you want to discuss things!
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Tue Sep 10, 2024 1:09 am by Nurin
Hai saya Nurin and I wish to have my first match here you can pick any of my girls (if you pick one of the hellhounds it will either be handicap or tag) for a match
https://www.afwrpg.com/t23085-nurin-s-girls#582172
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Femdom matches with smothers in mixed matches
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If anyone has any female characters that needs more wins and uses moves like stinkface, breast smother etc let me know message me on discord thanks
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Improvement/Critique Thread
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
[size=85:2hswrh2c]...I don't suppose anyone has advice for me? >->;
TekRobo- Posts : 1471
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
Advice: Don't everyone post 200 requests in a row without offering anything thoughtful for someone else.
Also, don't post here if you're just looking for praise ò.ó
Also, don't post here if you're just looking for praise ò.ó
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Bluemouse- Posts : 11144
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
Bluemouse does have a point. >.<
Ehem, Kaz: Your princess girl is pretty neat, but her laugh doesn't do it for me. "Ohohohohoho~", like, just not feeling it, ya know? Besides that, I've only really role played with one of your characters - Mio could have been a little more expressive, but was overall solid. Eri really gets playful down well, although I haven't really spied on many matches including her. The rest... less knowledge. Deepest apologies!
Ehem, Kaz: Your princess girl is pretty neat, but her laugh doesn't do it for me. "Ohohohohoho~", like, just not feeling it, ya know? Besides that, I've only really role played with one of your characters - Mio could have been a little more expressive, but was overall solid. Eri really gets playful down well, although I haven't really spied on many matches including her. The rest... less knowledge. Deepest apologies!
TekRobo- Posts : 1471
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Re: Improvement/Critique Thread
[quote="kaz":19lcjgkn]I suppose I could ask for some feedbacks as well~
I'd like to know what I need to improve on my writings and roleplaying in general since I'm relatively new to this stuff. I'd also like to know what people think about my characters. Who's your favorite and less favorite characters? What do you like or dislike from that particular character?
Any criticism and suggestion would be much appreciated.
I'd like to know what I need to improve on my writings and roleplaying in general since I'm relatively new to this stuff. I'd also like to know what people think about my characters. Who's your favorite and less favorite characters? What do you like or dislike from that particular character?
Any criticism and suggestion would be much appreciated.
Don't be afraid to trust your rp partners. MOST of them are not out to bite you. I obviously like Azami and Mayu the best. My own preferences with Mayu aside, I think you have/COULD build something nice with Azami.
[quote="CybeastGregarX":19lcjgkn][quote="kaz":19lcjgkn]I suppose I could ask for some feedbacks as well~
I'd like to know what I need to improve on my writings and roleplaying in general since I'm relatively new to this stuff. I'd also like to know what people think about my characters. Who's your favorite and less favorite characters? What do you like or dislike from that particular character?
Any criticism and suggestion would be much appreciated.
Understand that you're not writing a short story, you're writing a collaborative narrative. Allow your rp partners to integrate their stories so they mix with what you have in mind and create a single, harmonious story that pleases both parties involved and is a pleasure to read.
Also:
If you THINK this, then it will happen. If you're worried, ask. Don't ask more than once though.Sometimes I think I annoy people with my RPing or something.
[quote="TekRobo":19lcjgkn][size=85:19lcjgkn]...I don't suppose anyone has advice for me? >->;
Show up to the party more? You seem eager to learn, which is great and not afraid to take what's offered and give what you can when you see it. But perhaps you're a bit overeager. That could lead to sore toes on the dance floor, but 'round here it just means you might get ahead of yourself and/or your partner. You don't have to write the whole thread in one post.
There, if you want drive by critiquing, then that's what you get. Take it or leave it.
As always, communication is key!
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