Re: Critique Thread

[Cirno]

Well Kitten, other then it being well written:

I gave me a bit of a Dead Space vibe but with a few catfighting and sexyness about. Being a Dead Space fan, I enjoyed reading it. Like I said it's well written and very detailed, the stuff with the dead bodies in the med bay gave me a bit of a Dead Space scene in my head, which is good!

Even though people might say that it's alot of text, it's because it's detailed enough to make even the poorly English understand it. I loved to read it. Hope you make more!

[Bluemouse]

You've posted 4 times so far, and not one of them in the right place. Good start.

[quote="Darkcronicler":1vuns92u]Hello I'm darkcronicler the being that brings the end of storys such as RPs and I need help to make my messenger and being who knows the story of all characters like natilia the dream.

[quote="Darkcronicler":1vuns92u]I check posts daily

[Tatyina]

[quote="Darkcronicler":9efrgrap]Um I am sorry about that just I love seeing endings to match and RPs and 'the dream' is the one with a hidden past so I would love to have a character that knows characters pasts.

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[Lobo]

[quote="Darkcronicler":1cc3j3rk]Um I am sorry about that just I love seeing endings to match and RPs and 'the dream' is the one with a hidden past so I would love to have a character that knows characters pasts.

Nah. That would suck.

[quote="Tatyina":24035jv8][quote="Darkcronicler":24035jv8]Um I am sorry about that just I love seeing endings to match and RPs and 'the dream' is the one with a hidden past so I would love to have a character that knows characters pasts.

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[Bluemouse]

GET THE HELL OUT OF THE CRITIQUE THREAD! ALL OF YOU (US)!! >:O

[LunarWolf]

Critique thread failed long ago " title="Razz" />

Let it be used for fun now ^_^

And I don't know if Alexandra was complementing you, so much as stating that you seem more sentient than most bots " title="Razz" />

[Kitten]

But too dumb to be human...

I knew mongooses were going to learn how to use the interwebs sooner or later


Mods: please delete this posts and all previous ones till Cirno's

[Alexandra]

Okay, Dark, some advice?

Don't doublepost. Especially so fast.

You delete posts with the X button in the upper right of your post, but you can't do it if someone posts after you.

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