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All of blade/speranza wreslters
Sun Apr 07, 2024 12:00 am by Blade/speranza
If you ant a march with any of thme let me know this is also a post for them
Sperzana bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22432-speranza-doncy?highlight=Speranza
Blade bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22536-blade-mccharge-the-blade-of-the-world?highlight=blade
Catherine: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22906-catherine-the-great-celestial?highlight=Catherine
Sperzana bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22432-speranza-doncy?highlight=Speranza
Blade bio: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22536-blade-mccharge-the-blade-of-the-world?highlight=blade
Catherine: https://www.afwrpg.com/t22906-catherine-the-great-celestial?highlight=Catherine
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Improvement/Critique Thread
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Re: Critique Thread
Maybe I never changed my name and there was a guy named Cirno and I am back since today. Huh?
And that's what I love about them. Close to insanity, dark in their own accord but incredibly sexy at the same time. But I think you finally found that out, didn't you.
And that's what I love about them. Close to insanity, dark in their own accord but incredibly sexy at the same time. But I think you finally found that out, didn't you.
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Cirno- Posts : 11729
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Re: Critique Thread
Please, your girls are all tiny, adorable, and cuuuute.
Hawthorne22- Posts : 2587
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Re: Critique Thread
I don't find them to be particularly dark. Being angry isn't really dark. Children get angry, and I wouldn't fit them for a black leather trench coat right \away.
Bluemouse- Posts : 11144
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Re: Critique Thread
To be honest, what am going for is scary, aggressive, violent. Something different from what other people have.
Which is probably why people don't like/want to RP with me, they are afraid of their character's head being ripped off, lol.
My Price, my ' main ' will always be Cerbera, I have the most fun RPing her, whether it in a fight, a plot or a simple RP, she always brings the best in me.
Which is probably why people don't like/want to RP with me, they are afraid of their character's head being ripped off, lol.
My Price, my ' main ' will always be Cerbera, I have the most fun RPing her, whether it in a fight, a plot or a simple RP, she always brings the best in me.
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Re: Critique Thread
I don't know for a fact that people avoid rp'ing with you specifically, but I think that all people that have a hard time getting match partners have up to two things in common. Those two things being poor writing/role playing, and people who don't play with the other person. My way or the highway types. I don't know that you fit into those categories, but if you did I'd imagine you'd fall into the latter trap.
Bluemouse- Posts : 11144
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Re: Critique Thread
If that was true, I'd have alotta wins on my names.
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Re: Critique Thread
Yeah, that's why I don't count you as one of those people. One of the reasons at least.
Bluemouse- Posts : 11144
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Re: Critique Thread
Ok, just to keep this on track, Im going to take a risk and offer myself up. What do I do wrong? What do I do that pisses you off? in RPs, Characters, or just in general. How can I improve?
I better see the word "Bacon" used at least once damnit.
I better see the word "Bacon" used at least once damnit.
Old_Man_Tai- Posts : 9571
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Re: Critique Thread
Tai: Link an rp that you think is representative of your style and I'll take a crack at it.
Bluemouse- Posts : 11144
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Re: Critique Thread
I suppose the best examples of my style would have to be the two matches Ive had with ZXN on the board, which I have to say are by far the best board matches Ive ever had and rank in the top 5 matches of my Cyber Wrestling life.
http://afwrpg.informe.com/forum/arena-f28/sex-wars-title-belt-chigusa-vs-tai-complete-t3049.html
http://afwrpg.informe.com/forum/arena-f28/tai-vs-chigusa-2-fight-for-freedom-complete-t3743.html
http://afwrpg.informe.com/forum/arena-f28/sex-wars-title-belt-chigusa-vs-tai-complete-t3049.html
http://afwrpg.informe.com/forum/arena-f28/tai-vs-chigusa-2-fight-for-freedom-complete-t3743.html
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