Re: Friendly critique thread?

by Bluemouse Thu Jan 27, 2011 3:57 am

Lol.

Hawthorne is a guy I would certainly trust to improve my rp's. And yes, the only bad thing about Hawthorne is that there's NOT ENOUGH OF HIM. I recently read 'down time' for the first time outside of writing it, and all of his posts are great, they're just too far between. This means that real life is interfering with our enjoyment of him here. I propose that we ruin his real life. More for us! More for ME!

Also, Hawthorne, if you have any words of wisdom for me, I'm allllllll ears. Maybe via pm so this doesn't turn into the 'hawthorne talks about everyone's stuff' thread.

by Hawthorne22 Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:03 am

Shit, BM, your posts are better than mind handily. The ONLY problem I got is that I can't keep up with Taylor's constant mood swings, but that's kinda the whole point, isn't it? <img src=

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by Lobo Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:05 am

Hawthorne you is now the BANE of my existance. XP Why must you be so badass at rping!?!?!!??!

I demand a brutal critique from the whole damn site! Come on! COME ON! HIT ME! HIT ME!

by Bluemouse Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:14 am

EVERYone wants a piece of Hawthorne now. It's not easy being on top.

I'm not better. I'm different. And what you do isn't what I do and I like what you do. That's about it.

And Taylor does NOT have mood swings! She's just very passionate and feels things very strongly. She's a race car and she is frequently in the red. Otherwise she's a PERFECTLY RATIONAL person. Perfectly.

by Hawthorne22 Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:14 am

Lobo you just suck.

by Lobo Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:25 am

Muahahahaha!

The Incarnation Of Failure retains his title! >D

by Bluemouse Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:29 am

Well then. The king has spoken. Lobo, I think you know what to do. Go rp with other people who suck. From a laptop while crying in the bathroom. Go! Goooooooooo!

I'll read stuff when I get around to it and all, but Lobo I remember liking the Kelly-Babel rp a lot.

by Lobo Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:34 am

You know I would Blue but all I have is my desktop... *sigh* Guess I'll just cry at the Desk. "Wah-Wah..."

Meh take your time. ^ ^ I'll also be sure to let Tat know you liked the Kelly/Babel thing... Hence it wouldnt have been as good without em >.>

Edit: Im a horribly newbish RPer. I started at AFW 1 year ago and it was the 1st place i rp'd. I had nothing prior to that. I say my writing skills are decent even tho i failed my College English Class.

by Bluemouse Thu Jan 27, 2011 4:49 am

You fail english? That's unpossible!

Tatyina already knows that I'm a fan of everything that falls under that green lettering. With the possible exception of some of the copious amounts of lesing. That I'm a tad iffy on. But everything else....stupendous!

by Lobo Thu Jan 27, 2011 5:02 am

Bah! An Ebonics speaking Mexican from Texas getting a D in english is never unpossible! People like me MURDER the English Language. Holla at cha boi!

Oh great... More awards toward Tatyina & Hawthorne... >.>

*sigh* Dad was right... I shoulda stayed home and herded goats in Tha Hood.

Well before we turn this thing off topic. Since we got no critiques at the moment i guess im done for now. ^ ^

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