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Looking for my first match!
Wed Oct 16, 2024 8:32 pm by CaptainL
Hey there! Just got my first profile approved, and I'm ready to get started at AFW. Hit me up on Discord or DMs if you want to discuss things!
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Match request
Tue Sep 10, 2024 1:09 am by Nurin
Hai saya Nurin and I wish to have my first match here you can pick any of my girls (if you pick one of the hellhounds it will either be handicap or tag) for a match
https://www.afwrpg.com/t23085-nurin-s-girls#582172
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Femdom matches with smothers in mixed matches
Mon Jun 24, 2024 2:01 am by jdo_sss
If anyone has any female characters that needs more wins and uses moves like stinkface, breast smother etc let me know message me on discord thanks
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AFW Writing unison
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Re: AFW Writing unison
[quote="dragonswill":1v1rdgsa]Thank you for your constructive advice and I'll try and work on what you said, but English was never my best subject in school, really. At least I'm trying, okay?
I'm going to be Anegge for a second, and say that there's a start for you. Content is important, but form is how you communicate that content. A photographer whose work has absolutely stunning composition and subject will still produce unremarkable or ugly work if he doesn't know how to work a camera. You can write the most beautiful, emotionally stirring song in the world, but if you can't sing a note no one will be able to appreciate it.
No one's saying you're a bad RP'er, as I understand it you're not half bad, but it's difficult to understand how you could try, but fail to use any punctuation whatsoever. Just do it! You can at least get it in the ballpark, and it makes it much better for people rp'ing with you if your posts are easy to read.
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Re: AFW Writing unison
After spending 30 minutes reading everything on this topic I suppose I should throw in something constructive - Or at least try.
The top 10 system is a like a Vogue model: Great to look at but mainly brain dead and useless. It is mainly a vanity device which allows people to feel good about themselves.
All PPV matches and Title matches I think should be mod controlled, or at least set up a committee of new members to pick new matches and to shift through match requests. Infact why don't you get one person to be dedicated to it. So people PM them which characters they want to use for special matches and they basically pair them and look over them. Naturally as I came up with the idea and being a slightly pompous Brit I put myself forward for the role xD
The top 10 system is a like a Vogue model: Great to look at but mainly brain dead and useless. It is mainly a vanity device which allows people to feel good about themselves.
All PPV matches and Title matches I think should be mod controlled, or at least set up a committee of new members to pick new matches and to shift through match requests. Infact why don't you get one person to be dedicated to it. So people PM them which characters they want to use for special matches and they basically pair them and look over them. Naturally as I came up with the idea and being a slightly pompous Brit I put myself forward for the role xD
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Re: AFW Writing unison
[quote="jakeb1993":2h5hhv2w]After spending 30 minutes reading everything on this topic I suppose I should throw in something constructive - Or at least try.
The top 10 system is a like a Vogue model: Great to look at but mainly brain dead and useless. It is mainly a vanity device which allows people to feel good about themselves.
All PPV matches and Title matches I think should be mod controlled, or at least set up a committee of new members to pick new matches and to shift through match requests. Infact why don't you get one person to be dedicated to it. So people PM them which characters they want to use for special matches and they basically pair them and look over them. Naturally as I came up with the idea and being a slightly pompous Brit I put myself forward for the role xD
That's basically what the mods do, so... " title="cookie" />The top 10 system is a like a Vogue model: Great to look at but mainly brain dead and useless. It is mainly a vanity device which allows people to feel good about themselves.
All PPV matches and Title matches I think should be mod controlled, or at least set up a committee of new members to pick new matches and to shift through match requests. Infact why don't you get one person to be dedicated to it. So people PM them which characters they want to use for special matches and they basically pair them and look over them. Naturally as I came up with the idea and being a slightly pompous Brit I put myself forward for the role xD
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Re: AFW Writing unison
Yeah... welcome to the board. We have all that.
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Re: AFW Writing unison
Honestly, I never had a problem with a match being toooo competitive between the writers. I mean if the other writer gives me a hint, during the match, that he/she wants to win,by the intensity of their moves I comply and end up losing. I dont mind winning or losing if its fun " title="Smile" /> thats all I care about. If I give a hint that I want to win, well I certainly do hope the person person gets the idea, if he/she doesn't get it...well..then I improvise lol. Although I can see how the "Title" matches could be a little problematic...although the settling the title winner pre match seems like a decent enough idea ( I mean thats how real pro wrestling champs are determined lol).
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